Wednesday, September 16, 2015

Exemplification Essay Thesis Statement





America still believes in the traditional sound of a hot rod even if were riding in something that the 50's would laugh at.
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Outline: Preston Allen

Thesis:America still believes in the traditional sound of a hot rod even if were riding in something that the 50's would laugh at

Ideas:
  • muffler changes
  • new cars vs. old ones
  • why people think this
  • types of mufflers
  • Glasspacks
  • Cherry bombs
  • Flomaster
  • Catylatic Converter
  • Flow
  • Economic impact
  • Turrbo style
  • Personal Experiances
  • Enviromental Impact


Body 1: Why the people think this.
  1. The sound
  2. The performance
  3. The flow
Body 2:Why would they laugh today at the cars?
  1. The sound
  2. The enviromental impact
  3. The cost
Body 3: What are the main changes in the cars we see today from the cars back in the 50's?
  1. Catylitic converter
  2. Car styles
  3. The power
Conclusion: Restate thesis.

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