Wednesday, September 16, 2015
My exemplification thesis statement.
Thesis statement:
I love entertaining people and performing live music.
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Outline: By Connor Allen
Thesis: I love entertaining and performing live music.
Ideas:
- live sound
- Crowd interactions
-Feelings you get
- Atmosphere
- Stage fright
-Nerves
-Vocal warm ups
-Band complexity
-Favorite style of music
-Genre to crowd ratio
- Connections with feelings.
Body1: Live sound
1. Microphone
2. Levels
3. Wireles or not?
Body2: Style of music
1. Genre
2. Atomisphere
3. Interactions with crowd
Body3: Stage presense
1. Feeligns of excitment
2. Nerves
3. connections to the crowd
Conclusion:
Incoorperate ideas from the body paragraphs to tie up back to your thesis statement.
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Connor Allen,
Preston Allen
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